(A little far fetch, but, whatever.)
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"Missus Tate, we're gonna ask you to breath in and hold it while pushing and we'll tell you when to stop, okay?"
"1...2....3...4....(keep going!)...7...8. Well done, Missus Tate!"
"Good job, baby, we're so close."
"Okay, push! 2...3...4...5...6...7...8."
A tug.
A slap.
A wail.
She was here.
Little Rowan was here.
excellent job of showing without telling :)
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