We stagger through the fog. It burns our eyes. We don’t know
where we are going. We cling to each other.
I open my mouth to speak, in a desperate attempt to
communicate. The bitter fog fills my mouth, burns my lungs; it chokes me.
I can’t breath. I can’t breath.
My hand drops from your arm.
You disappear.
My hands grope around in the grey. I can’t find you.
Where are you?
My lungs constrict. I fall to the ground.
A hand on my shoulder. Two more hands pulling me up.
But I don’t know who it is.
Panic
This. I like this a lot.
ReplyDeleteI love the ending word. The lack of punctuation is a nice touch. Powerful.
ReplyDeleteexcellent. perfect ending too.
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