Her heart pounded.
Dare she cast a glance in his direction?
It would take courage and subtlety. It would take poise. It
was a battle between fluttering heart, logical mind and a blushing face. It
felt like a daring move for a shy girl such as herself.
She turned her head slowly, pretending to look at the crowd
between them. Pretending to be interested in others, when she was only
interested in him.
What could go wrong?
She saw him avert his eyes suddenly as her glance fell on
his slightly red face.
Her heart fluttered.
He was already looking.
Literally captured the emotion perfectly. Also. I hope this is about you. ;)
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It was a battle between fluttering heart, logical mind and a blushing face.
excellent! I love your word choice and your pacing.
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