Row,
row, row your boat
They named this place Mar del Sol
And it is brimful with
Golden sunlight spun silver
Gently
down the stream
Lunacy, they say
That place is desert-dry
The song is a metaphor, and so is Tranquility
Merrily,
merrily, merrily, merrily
Copernicus, Copernicus
When will you learn-icus?
I am the pole and the universe is spinning
Life
is but a dream
A man lived here once
Of old he blew out candles on bedside tables
Ushered us between the cloud-curtains, the doorway
to his abode
We swam in gilded rivers
Over crater-waterfalls into our own minds
I don't have the brain capacity to give constructive criticism right now. But I just want to say that this is beautiful
ReplyDeleteThis is so good. Your word choice is stunning. I feel like it deserves more than a cursory read-through. It deserves a full-out analysis.
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