Thursday, May 16, 2013


Row, row, row your boat

They named this place Mar del Sol
And it is brimful with
Golden sunlight spun silver

Gently down the stream

Lunacy, they say
That place is desert-dry
The song is a metaphor, and so is Tranquility

Merrily, merrily, merrily, merrily

Copernicus, Copernicus
When will you learn-icus?
I am the pole and the universe is spinning

Life is but a dream

A man lived here once
Of old he blew out candles on bedside tables
Ushered us between the cloud-curtains, the doorway to his abode
We swam in gilded rivers
Over crater-waterfalls into our own minds

2 comments:

  1. I don't have the brain capacity to give constructive criticism right now. But I just want to say that this is beautiful

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  2. This is so good. Your word choice is stunning. I feel like it deserves more than a cursory read-through. It deserves a full-out analysis.

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