Sixteen soldiers
Spread out
on a hill
Looking for survivors
Where the
dead are burning still
Sixteen soldiers
Going street
by street
Searching
for the living
In the place
where dead men meet
Sixteen soldiers
Sifting through
remains
Seeking
someone, anyone
With blood
still in their veins
Sixteen soldiers
Standing in
a row
Staring at
an orange sky
It ends
today, we know
Black suits,
green eyes
Guns up,
faces down
Three big
flashes
Bullets through
the town
One falls,
two fall
The ground
is in the air
Ashes ashes,
we all fall down
Thirteen
soldiers
Left to
carry on
Nothing spectacular?!!
ReplyDeleteThis is incredible.
WOW!!!! I love this one so much! This is favorite that you have done so far this month!
ReplyDeleteI knew this was yours, as soon as I started! It had your touch!
ReplyDeleteThat was amazing, I loved it!!!
Are you serious right now? This is excellent! The pacing is fantastic!
ReplyDeleteAmazing amazing amazing.
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