Scream. Tore through utter silence as the man fell.
“No I don’t hate you, I just want to save you while there is still something to be saved. No, I don’t hate you. I don’t hate you.”
“Who spoke?”
I know that she is with you. I have heard her voice before...
And there she rose before him. I remember for I was there.
The slim figure stode before the great warlord, hundreds of people kneeling around their feet.
There it was that she drew close to him, and without removing her gaze from his eyes, snuffed out his life.
whoa! surprise ending :D I love the last paragraph, excellent descriptions.
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