Thursday, May 15, 2014

Dancing Feet


They connected while dancing.
He proposed through dance, their leaps and their twirls in that waltz ending up at that certain table with that certain box that served as table for that ring.
They had five dancers and each hinted at their dancing feet by the kicks felt within.
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They danced until wrinkles covered their face, and their feet struggled to move. They danced until hair grew white like their first dancing shoes. And when they returned to that dance hall, memories came flooding back. Albeit with wrinkles and ache-y joints, their feet moved as they hadn’t in years.

3 comments:

  1. "They had five dancers..." it took me a minute to figure out that sentence but when I did I thought it was really cool.

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  2. This is really neat. Love the repetition of the themes of dancing, movements, feet, etc.

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