He paced, waiting. She'd said she would be here by now. The little box he held made his hands sweat. Finally she arrived. She was so beautiful.
She waited for him to speak. He'd said this was important. Her heart skipped when he spoke. Finally he asked. He was so handsome.
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He stood, waiting. She'd said she loved him. The thought of her made his heart pound. Finally the doors opened. She was so beautiful.
She waited for the music. He'd said he loved her. She wanted to skip down the aisle. Finally the doors opened. He was so handsome.
I love the repetition in this.
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