He paced the dorm room nervously, flipping the small box around in his hands.
It’s gotta be the best love song she’s ever heard in her life
He rehearsed in his mind. Trying to find the right words. “No they’re all wrong!” he growled.
I gotta tell her how I feel
His roommate looked up from his magazine. “Seriously dude, relax,” he drawled, he obviously didn’t see the importance.
Now look her in the eye. Say ‘baby I love you’ I never put no one above you.
The anxious young man flashed a lovesick grin and hurriedly left the room.
I like this too!! I think you have done an excellent job capturing his emotions.
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