Friday, May 10, 2013

Psychotic


“Please give me a break,” their voice whimpered. 
“Haha!” He laughed. His laugh was genuine, but his tone was psychotic.  “One break coming up!” 

There was a snap and a high scream of intense pain. 

Sobbing. 
“You asked me for a break. I must listen when you ask so nicely!” 

“No, no, no. Dear God…” 
“Oh my dear man. God is not here for you.” 



“F.B.I! Do not move!” 

Psychotic laughter and grunts as a body was thrown to the floor. 
Metal of handcuffs rattled and clicked closed. 

“One victim living, call an ambulance!"
"Get that bastard out of here.” 

2 comments:

  1. awesome! I love this little story. great job of painting such a good picture in 100 words!

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  2. This is really good. Nice use of only 100 words to ratchet up the tension.

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