I count my
strides as we run.
Almost
there.
So close.
“Get down!”
I turn. The
blast hits me like a wall.
Ash and dirt
and someone’s blood. I wipe it off my
face.
Ten.
A second
explosion. We’re even less prepared.
Eight.
We scramble
for cover, crouch in the ruins.
“Where are
they?”
No one
knows.
Then the
clouds lets loose. Metal ricochets, finds a target.
Seven
Six
Five
A shard
bites into my shoulder. I fight the welling scream.
No noise, no
sound.
Lungs hardly
moving.
Wait.
Maybe they
can’t see…
Another
blast,
another
spray of blood.
Three.
I like this a lot. I love the count down through out.
ReplyDeleteWow.. Incredible.
ReplyDeleteSo good. so. good.
ReplyDeleteThe countdown is an excellent touch.
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