Fabric filled the air with colors as they tumbled from the trunk. Hands pawed through their new found treasures. Eyes peered into the trunk, seeing what else might catch their eye. Long lengths were wrapped around shoulders, and hats squished on top of heads. One piece was turned this way and that, pairs of eyes staring inquisitively.
"That's a funny..." a voice trailed. It was tossed aside given up on.
"Hey, I wanted that one!" a voice grabbed, but it was already possessed by another.
The attic door turned open and Grandmother filled the opening, "What are you children doing?"
I LOVE this!
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This is great! and i love how you wrote it with the hands, eyes, and voices being the 'actors'
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yes! this is so cute.
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