The doors swung open, and the place fell quiet. He slowly
made his way over to the bar, settling onto one too of the many creaky bars
stools. People whispered, afraid of upsetting the man.
“Give me
the usual.” His voice sounded like the grating of gravel. He pulled a knife,
and plunged it into the bar.
He slowly chugged the amber liquid in the glass and slammed
the glass down on the wooded counter. He wiped his scruffy chin with the back
of his hand as he stood, stretched, and walked out into the blazing sun and swirling
wind.
nice! I am very much looking forward to part 2 of this story :)
ReplyDeleteEspecially loved the detail of him plunging the knife into the bar!
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