There’s
a little shaking of the earth tonight
Just
a little twitch
But
it’s stronger than yesterday’s
and
it grows like rabid drums
And
my feet, they’ve known the ground
But
now they are uncertain
Pebbles
dance like mad men
Where
pebbles should be still
And
now my heart, it tremors
I
do not know this beat.
The
sea himself rolls back
Away
from mountain cliffs
And
the creatures that are his
Streak
beneath the blue
I
want to hide there too
The
oracle is chanting
Eyes
glazed over, white
Something
is coming, he screams
Growing,
coming, crawling from deeps
you amaze me. this is brilliantly paced, and vividly portrayed--I especially love "pebbles dance like mad men" and that whole stanza. also your use of rhyme is very tasteful. well done :)
ReplyDeleteThis is fantastic! "grows like rabid drums" is my favorite line =)
ReplyDeletegood job Bekah!
ReplyDeleteNice job, Bekah!
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