The bucket was empty, the well was
far.
The hill was steep, the crank was
stuck.
It took two of them, little hands pushing pulling tugging,
before water came up. Cold, so cold . And colored brown. A little muddy, yes.
The grass was wet, the ground had
holes.
The sky was dark, they couldn’t
see.
He tripped first on a patch of wet mud. And she came tumbling after.
The water was spilt, it pooled in
the mud.
But no one cared, the crying wasn’t
for that.
The tears were for the blood that swirled around his broken
head.
Oh man... this is brilliant.. and sad, and so well written... I love it.
ReplyDeleteI love this. Such a fantastic take on an old story.
ReplyDeleteLove this! And loved the part about the tears for the spilled water and blood at the end!
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