Tuesday, May 1, 2012

A Running Rebellion

At first, his pace was slow and measured. A woven layer of roots, rocks, and rotting leaves, flowed past his gaze, reminding of the 20, forever corrupted. He searched the horizon, and found the setting sun. His eyes, wet with forming tears, glinted with every movement. His entire frame cried out to be used, so he bolted towards the light, dodging trees, and jumping boulders. He screamed. His arms danced to maintain pristine balance. Every ounce of energy was exhaled into into the world, out of every arm and leg and lung, travelling far and wide into the world unseen.

2 comments:

  1. this is very poetic. the description of this world seems to me like the icing on a terrible terrible cake. I want to know what has happened...but then I feel it is probably really rather frightening.

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  2. Oh wow.... This is very poetic, agreed with Bekah.. I really love the transitions you have starting out slow and then ending on the terrific action.. Really love this.

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