The drunken man flung the empty bottle at the stationary
character.
It bounced, and landed far from the intended target.
“I’ll
give you one chance to cut this bullshit.”
Laughing, the man stumbled forward, falling face first
into the street. He stood, wiping his face.
“Draw!”
He said, waving the gun.
“Last
chance.”
He held his gun with both hands, carefully taking aim. “Fu—“
BANG
He dropped to the ground, blood blossoming on his chest.
The man walked over, holstering his smoking gun. He
kneeled, the man still breathing. “I’ll see you in hell.” A final shot echoed
out.
powerful end to your tale!
ReplyDeleteWow, good closing scene!
ReplyDeleteI really like this a lot.. :)
ReplyDeleteNice ending, well done.
Love the ending.
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