Thursday, May 10, 2012

The Beginning Part 2, May 4 (Took me awhile to publish it)

The snow around his feet was white and crusty. He began to dig. As he dug, he uncovered a boot, then a glove. Deeper and deeper he dug. A boot, quickly followed by a torn glove were uncovered. He knelt there in the hole. The object before him was the remnants of a body, but barely. An arm was missing, as was a foot. He reached with a trembling hand pulled a wallet from the back pocket and put it in the bag he had recovered. He heard a noise and looked up into a snarling face. “God,” he whispered.

4 comments:

  1. Nice. I like that it drops us right in the middle of the action and doesn't give us all the answers.

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  2. This is great, like a piece of a movie trailer!

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