Thursday, May 10, 2012
The Beginning Part 2, May 4 (Took me awhile to publish it)
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snow around his feet was white and crusty. He began to dig. As he dug, he
uncovered a boot, then a glove. Deeper and deeper he dug. A boot, quickly followed
by a torn glove were uncovered. He knelt there in the hole. The object before
him was the remnants of a body, but barely. An arm was missing, as was a foot.
He reached with a trembling hand pulled a wallet from the back pocket and put
it in the bag he had recovered. He heard a noise and looked up into a snarling
face. “God,” he whispered.
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creepy! good descriptions :D
ReplyDeleteNice. I like that it drops us right in the middle of the action and doesn't give us all the answers.
ReplyDeleteThis is great, like a piece of a movie trailer!
ReplyDeleteSo so gooood! :)
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